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Post by prettyss0 on Jun 23, 2006 21:53:36 GMT 10
V Nice
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Post by deepsea on Jun 24, 2006 2:05:08 GMT 10
very nice poetry
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Post by Prince_Imran on Jun 24, 2006 6:22:58 GMT 10
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Post by SupremeSohni on Jun 25, 2006 0:44:37 GMT 10
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Post by zee on Jul 17, 2006 7:37:53 GMT 10
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Post by SupremeSohni on Jul 17, 2006 14:23:10 GMT 10
Aansu Aa Jaate Hain Aankhon Mein,
Par Labon Pe Hasi Laani Parti Hai,
Yeh Mohabbat Bhi Kya Cheez Hai Yaaro,
Jis Se Karte Hain Usi Se Chupaani Parti Hai.
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Post by deadly on Jul 17, 2006 14:40:46 GMT 10
KABHI ARSH PAR , KABHI FARSH PAR KABHI IN K DAR , KABHI UN K DAR GHAM-E-AASHQI TERA SHUKRYA MAIN KAHAN KAHAN SAY GUZAR GYA...!!!!!
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Post by captain on Jul 17, 2006 16:07:10 GMT 10
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Post by deadly on Jul 17, 2006 16:43:00 GMT 10
ALWIDA YEH CHUND BARAS KA JOU SAATH HAY HAMAIN YAAD HAY , HAMAIN YAAD HAY WOH JOU IBTIDA KA SAROOR THA WOH JOU NAAZ THA JOU GHAROOR THA WOH JOU WAQT KI THEE NAWAZISHAIN HAMAIN YAAD HAY , HAMAIN YAAD HAY WOH JOU NAMBAROON KAY SARAB THAY WOH JOU IMTAHAN KAY AZAB THAY WOH JOU HOSLAY THAY JOU KHOWAB THAY WOH JOU TECHROON KAY SAWAL THAY AUR HAMARAY BARWAQT JAWAB THAY HAMAY YAAD HAY , HAMAY YAAD HAY KAHIN DOOSTOUN KI SIASATAIN KAHIN TEACHROON KI RAFAQTAIN KAHIN HAR SAZA PAR BAGHAWATAIN KABHI MUSHKILAIN KABHI RAHATAIN HAMAIN YAAD HAY , HAMAIN YAAD HAY KABHI NAAZ APNAY NASEEB PAR KABHI RASHK APNAY RAQEEB PAR KABH I MANZILOON KI KHABAR NA THEE KABHI SOUCHTAY THAY TAVEEL HAY RAH-E- SHOUQ KI YEH MUSAFATAIN KABHI KHUD HI KEHTAY QALEEL HAIN BARI BAY YAQEENI KI SA'ATAIN MAGAR AB YEH FIKAR HAY DOOSTOUN KAY TAMAM HOU GYA IK SAFAR NAEY RASTOUN PAY JOU HAY NAZAR NAEY MANZAROON KI TALASH HAY KAHIN AAGAY BARHNAY KI FIKR HAY KAHIN FIKR-E-KASBAY MA'ASH HAY WHO JO U ZINDAGI KAY CHUPAY HOAY KAI RAAZ HAIN KAI KHWAB HAIN ABHI KUCH DINOON MAIN YEH DAIKHNA KA Y HAQEEKATOUN MAIN YEH BADAL GAEY KAI LOUG AISAY BHI DAIKHNA! KAY JOU RASTA APNA BADAL GAEY HAAN MAGAR YEH KISAY KAHANIYAN JOU HAQEEKATOUN KA NICHOUR HAIN INHAIN BHOOL SAKTAY NAHI KABHI HAMAIN YAAD AAO GAY TUM SABHI YEH CHUND BARAS KA JOU SAATH HAY HAMAIN YAAD HAY HAMAIN YAAD HAY. Its me Deadly ...
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Post by zee on Jul 19, 2006 4:27:09 GMT 10
very nice deadly bhai
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Post by zee on Jul 19, 2006 4:30:16 GMT 10
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Post by fariya on Jul 19, 2006 6:54:11 GMT 10
bohat acha likha hai aap nay urdu main zee please hum ko bhi urdu main likhna sikha dain na
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Post by deadly on Jul 19, 2006 13:46:16 GMT 10
ajnabi ajnabi si rahon ka ek ajnabi musafir .... mujh se pooch betha hai ... rasta bata doge ? ajnabi ajnabi si rahon ke .. ajnabi musafir sun!!!! rasta koi bhi ho ... wasta koi bhi ho ... manzilein nahi miltiiin .... manzilein to dhoka hein .. manzilein jo mil jaein .. justujoo nahi rehti .. zindagi ko jeene ki arzoo nahi rehti.
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Post by princeofdeath on Jul 19, 2006 20:12:43 GMT 10
buhat khoob zee bhai urdu main aisay he likhtay rahin
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Post by deadly on Jul 20, 2006 3:16:35 GMT 10
Subha ki thandak mein ... Phoolon ki shabnam mein ... Din ke ujaley mein .... Chand ke haley mein ... Sham ki shehnai mein ... Raat ki tanhai mein ... Dostoon ke jhameley mein ... Aur beth ke akeley mein ...
Main ne dhonda saber-o-qarar ... Khushiyon ke mausam mein ... Aanson ke aalam mein ... Dosroon ki batoon mein ...
Beechen ratoon mein ... Dostoon ki qurbat mein ... Apno ki muhabat mein ... Chand ki chandni mein ...
Main ne dhonda saber-o-qarar ... chen se na soyi main ... Din raat royi main ... Haqeqat hoyi mujh pe zahir ...
Aur mil gaya mujh ko aakhir ... Merey dil ka saber-o-qarar ... Meri duaon mein ... Sari iltajaon mein ...
Sab ebadat mein... Rab se muhabat mein ... Aur phir koyi dukh koyi azaab ... Koyi ranj na raha iss khushi ke baad ...
Maire Khaliq maire Malik ... Maire <(_!_)! se dosti ke baad... now i need no one ....i got evrything....
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Post by zee on Jul 20, 2006 4:26:33 GMT 10
fariya ji aap pehlay senior ya super member tu ban jao pir sikha dain gay aap ko jo sekhna chahao gi
thx prince bhai
once again very nice deadly
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Post by prettyss0 on Jul 20, 2006 6:11:44 GMT 10
Wow too good Zee and deadly...very nice poetry
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Post by zee on Jul 20, 2006 6:23:28 GMT 10
very nice Maheen kamal kar dia aap nay ab yeh chech karo
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Post by prettyss0 on Jul 20, 2006 6:25:22 GMT 10
wow zabardast abhi try kerti hoon main bhi
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Post by zee on Jul 20, 2006 6:29:13 GMT 10
bilkul karo try hum tu isi tarah apna deewan chapwa lain gay
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Post by deadly on Jul 20, 2006 13:37:26 GMT 10
Zee Bhai buhat he ala zabar 10 Maheen very nice Aaj tu maza ageya pharkay
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Post by deadly on Jul 20, 2006 14:09:24 GMT 10
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Post by captain on Jul 21, 2006 4:30:27 GMT 10
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Post by SupremeSohni on Jul 21, 2006 5:08:00 GMT 10
Zindagi May Hamesha Naye Log Milenge, Kahin Ziyada To Kahin Kam Milenge, Aitbaar Zara Soch Kar Karna, Mumkin Nahi Har Jagah Tumhe Hum Milenge
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Post by SupremeSohni on Jul 21, 2006 5:12:26 GMT 10
Mohabbat main itna door nikal jayenge kabhi socha na tha Hum wafa karke bhi bewafa kehlaayenge kabhi socha na tha Zamane se tanha hi takrayen ge kabhi socha na tha Hum to Pyaar ke naam se hi na aashna the Chahat ki itni bari saza payenge kabhi socha na tha Us ka her andaaz doorson se judda lagta hai Uske rang main hum rang jayenge kabhi socha na tha
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Post by zee on Jul 21, 2006 6:14:04 GMT 10
very great poetry friends
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Post by SupremeSohni on Jul 21, 2006 13:42:46 GMT 10
Very Nice Poetry Maheen........zabardast
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Post by deadly on Jul 21, 2006 14:24:39 GMT 10
Dard phail jaey tou, Ik wakt aata hay, Dil dharakta rehta hay, Aarzoo guzeeroun k , hoslay nahi chaltay, Dasht-e-bay yakeeni may , aasray nahi chaltay, Rehbaroun ki aankhoun may, Manzilain na jub tak houn… kaafley nahi chaltay…! Ik zara tawaja say , dekhiyeh tou khulta hay, Log in pay chaltay hain , “raastay” nahi chaltay ! Souchnay samajhnay say , saath sath chalnay say, Dooriyan simat’ti hain , “faaslay” nahi chaltay ! Khuaab khuaab aankhoun may , rat’jagay nahi chaltay, Darguzar k halkay may , “maslay” nahi chaltay.. Dou diloun ki qurbat may , teesra nahi hota, “waastay” nahi chaltay, wakt saath chalta hay , zindagi ki dour main, wakt raam karnay may.. tajrubay nahi chaltay ! ishq k ilaakay may , huk’m yaar chalta hay, “zaabtay” nahi chaltay… hus’n ki adalat may , aajzi tou chalti hay, “martabay” nahi chaltay.. dosti k rishtay ki….parwarish zaroori hay, silsilay ta’luk k , khud say bun tou jatay hain, lekin in shagoofoun kou… tootnay bikhranay say… “roukna” bhi parta hay..! chahatoun ki mitti kou , aarzoun k podoun kou.. “seenchna” bhi parta hay.. ranjishoun ki batooun kou…. “Bhoolna bhi parta hay” ….!!!!!!!!
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Post by prettyss0 on Jul 22, 2006 0:55:28 GMT 10
Excellent sab ka intekhab lawjawab
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Post by prettyss0 on Jul 22, 2006 2:51:50 GMT 10
Very nice sohni deadly
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