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Post by lazyprincessk on Nov 29, 2007 0:18:35 GMT 10
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Post by lazyprincessk on Nov 29, 2007 0:20:00 GMT 10
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Post by deadly on Nov 29, 2007 13:41:10 GMT 10
Nice copy cut khe khe khe
waqt badlta hai zindagi ke sath.
zindagi badlti hai mohabat ke sath.
mohbat nahi badlati apno ke sath
bas apne badal jate hai waqt ke saath.
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Post by zee on Nov 29, 2007 20:59:14 GMT 10
zabardast shairs
zabardast style
so0o0o0o0o0per
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Post by lazyprincessk on Nov 30, 2007 0:52:01 GMT 10
thankssssssssss alottt
app loog gr8888888888888...... 
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Post by Mr. Lonely on Nov 30, 2007 6:55:15 GMT 10
Very Lovely Poets Aap Sub ...
My Favourute Shair...
Bulandion Per Pohanchayega Mujhay mera hunar mujh ko ...
Mujhay pairon ke neechay Seerhian achi nahin lagti ...
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Post by lazyprincessk on Nov 30, 2007 13:00:35 GMT 10
areeeeeeeee wahhh ..dessert mai phooL..heheh..kiddding ...all sooper ones... 
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Post by deadly on Nov 30, 2007 14:19:34 GMT 10
is say barh kar main kiya zabt ki misal daita
wo mere pehlo main baith kar roe kise aur k liye
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Post by shahreen110 on Nov 30, 2007 18:40:19 GMT 10
HAZAROON MANZILAIN HON GI,,,HAZAOORN KARWAAN HONGAY...
HUMHE JAB NAZRAIN DHUNDAIN GEE NAJANE HUM KAHAN HON GAY,,
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Post by deadly on Dec 1, 2007 13:38:14 GMT 10
mujhe dard-e-ishq ka mazaa malum hai...
dard-e-dil ki inteha malum hai....
zindagi bhar muskurane ki dua naa dena...
mujhe pal bhar muskurane ki sazaa malum hai
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Post by sialkoty on Dec 1, 2007 15:52:35 GMT 10
Great Thread.
Excellent Work Shaaz ... as usual...
Bhool Jain Apko Ye Namumkin Baat Ha.
Na Ho Apko Yaqeen ye aur baat ha.
Jub tak rahey gi Saans tab tak karain ge yaad.
Ye saans hi toot jaye tu aur baat ha.
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Post by shahreen110 on Dec 2, 2007 17:23:01 GMT 10
PEACHLAY BARAS THA KHOUF TUJEH KHO NA DON KAHIN..
AB K BARUS YEH DUA HAI K TERA SAMNA NA HO....
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Post by angel on Dec 3, 2007 1:27:51 GMT 10
wow aap sab tu superb.....sab hi ek se bhar k ek:D
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Post by angel on Dec 3, 2007 1:29:48 GMT 10
Pyaar woh hame bepanah kar gaye, Phir zindagi m hame tanaha kr gaye
Chahat thi sath hone ki Par woh lout kar aane ko bhi mana kar gaye
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Post by deadly on Dec 3, 2007 14:29:51 GMT 10
Wha Super yaar kiya baat hay sab ek say bahr kay ek
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Post by deadly on Dec 3, 2007 14:30:31 GMT 10
Mitti ka jism leke Pani k ghar me hun.....
Manzil hai mout meri aur main har pal Safar me hun........
Hona hai katl ye maloom hai mujhe.
lekin khabar nahi k main kis ki Nazar me hun...............
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Post by zee on Dec 4, 2007 0:48:28 GMT 10
zabardast friends
keep it up
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Post by deadly on Dec 4, 2007 14:04:31 GMT 10
Thankz Zee je /  |
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Post by deadly on Dec 4, 2007 14:05:33 GMT 10
sehmi-sehmi nigahon me khwab hum jaga denge..
suni-suni rahon pe phool hum khila denge
aap hamare sang muskura kar to dekho
Hum aap ka har gham bhula denge....
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Post by zee on Dec 5, 2007 20:49:09 GMT 10
very nice
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Post by lazyprincessk on Dec 6, 2007 13:00:21 GMT 10
wOw wah wah wah...
soooper zabardastttt...alll thankss...lets continue..
Dosti toh sirf ek ittefaaq hai,
Yeh toh dilon ki mulaakaat hai,
Dosti nahi dekhti yeh din hai ki raat hai,
Isme toh sirf wafaadaari aur jasbaat hai ! 
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Post by deadly on Dec 6, 2007 13:52:47 GMT 10
wha wha
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Post by deadly on Dec 6, 2007 13:53:06 GMT 10
Geelay kaghaz ki tarhan hai zindagi apni
koi likhta bhi nahi aur jalata bhi nahi
Is qadar akailay ho gaye hain aj kal
koi satata bhi nahi aur manata bhi nahi..
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Post by angel on Dec 14, 2007 4:36:15 GMT 10
wah both of u r excellent
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Post by angel on Dec 14, 2007 4:36:57 GMT 10
Jehan talak bhi yeh sehra dekhai deta hai
Meri terhan se akela dekhai deta hai
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Post by deadly on Dec 14, 2007 13:35:26 GMT 10
Kool |
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Post by deadly on Dec 14, 2007 13:36:29 GMT 10
Ae Dopeher ki dhoop bata kia jawab doon???
Deewar poochti hai ke saya kidhar gaya.
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Post by deadly on Dec 14, 2007 13:40:14 GMT 10
Angel je aap gaib kahan ho jati hain
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Post by angel on Dec 17, 2007 2:38:41 GMT 10
nice shair....aur gaib hone ki weja bata de hai
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Post by angel on Dec 17, 2007 2:40:12 GMT 10
Ajnabi duniya me Akela khwab hu mei! Sawalo se ghira ek jawab hu mein
Jo na samajh sake Unke lie KOUN? Jo samajhe Unke lie ek kitaab hu mein
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